Bagaya Jroo7 this is really anie poem with nice rythem into it...
EEhhh sometimes u have one line that cliks in ur own mind and u say Man this is nice..like this line here from ur poem :
And then his solemn face, was broken by his smile man that was awsome way of livin the expression.. But Dear Bagaya jroo7..isnt it wrong to decribe angels as gal's even though they are little ! There is an Aya in the Holly Gor2an that talks about it but my memory failed me.. thank u again