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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة the pro man
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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ღ▫ sρɪяɪτ ▫ღ  One day at school i met them
They looked at me and said come
They started talking but i was so calm
I didnt know them and they dont know who i am
One of them looked at me asking: why dont you say ??!
Say what ???! Was my replay
She laughed and said : your name you fool
It seems like if you dont talk to people at all
Yeah, they are my friends
Who were by my side even to the very end
That day , it was like charm
I started to spend whith them most of my time
They were always there when i needed them
And when they call i always try to help them
And if your friends are like mine
Dont get over them and you'll be always fine
....
Ahhhh
Finally its done
This is my first time writing an english poem
Yeah,, i know its bad
But i really did my best
In this one hour
I didnt do it like if its a punishment
But because i saw that you all liked that idea
So whats your punishment
I'm really tired
Dont make me wait more please
like your way ....  mmmmmm thats not bad ,, nice try but :77:the words in the red are effect in the body of the poem charm pronunciation not like time pronunciation I prof.  << oooooooooout |
Well actually i read some english poems
I saw that's there is no problem if the sounds werent exactly the same
And mine are not that different
Thanks for the complement
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