عضو في ورطة - الصفحة 29 - عيون العرب

**برو@** · #**141** 09-06-2012, 12:39 AM

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ياااا ريت ,, بدي اروح ع البحر
احم العقاب عقاب ما بصير التهرب منه
و مثل ما حكت سارة واجبي اكون مدقق يعني شو اعمل هيك سنة الحياة

**Heavens ❤** · #**142** 09-06-2012, 12:44 AM

Is it really that bad

??!

I was really glad that i managed to write it
You are really evil

TT~TT

**Evey** · #**143** 09-06-2012, 12:53 AM

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ღ▫ sρɪяɪτ ▫ღ

Is it really that bad

??!

I was really glad that i managed to write it
You are really evil

TT~TT

Welcome to Life

**Heavens ❤** · #**144** 09-06-2012, 12:58 AM

Ok then you evil friend

My hand hurts me now

So i will try to write another one later
Even i know it will be soooo bad
Cause you've already crushed my well

You just keep dreaming of that my dear
:ha3:

ميرليا · #**145** 09-06-2012, 08:27 PM

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ღ▫ sρɪяɪτ ▫ღ

one day at school i met them
they looked at me and said come
they started talking but i was so calm
i didnt know them and they dont know who i am
one of them looked at me asking: Why dont you say ??!
Say what ???! Was my replay
she laughed and said : Your name you fool
it seems like if you dont talk to people at all
yeah, they are my friends
who were by my side even to the very end
that day , it was like charm
i started to spend whith them most of my time
they were always there when i needed them
and when they call i always try to help them
and if your friends are like mine
dont get over them and you'll be always fine

....
Ahhhh
finally its done

this is my first time writing an english poem

yeah,, i know its bad
but i really did my best
in this one hour

i didnt do it like if its a punishment
but because i saw that you all liked that idea

so whats your punishment
i'm really tired
dont make me wait more please

القصيده اعجبتني كثير واتمني اني استطيع ان اؤللف واحده مثلها ومع انني اعرف اللغه الانجليزيه الا انني لم افكر يوما بكتابة قصيده لا بالعربي ولا بالانجليزي
ولكن القصيده ليست علي نفس القافيه فهل ستؤلفين واحده جديده ؟

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